Greetings and salutation, my name is Wrex and this is my review. Here's an interesting story, it's 'Spike the Dog'. In this story, Spike ends up staying as a dog after returning to Equestria from the other world. I found this story very unique given the surprises this story provides for the readers. This story shows that emotional stability is a very fragile thing, that a friendly ear is good thing to have, and that it's best to make the best out of a bad situation. Aside from some grammatical

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Nova gave me a small note on my new change and I resolved to add a quick line...

...Yeah, and then THIS happened:

“After dinner!” Twilight Velvet said quickly. “We’ll come right back, I promise!”

"Yeah! Portals can wait!” Night Light shouted from the rolled-down, driver’s side window of a silver sedan. “Our daughter needs friends that aren’t four-legged!"

“HONEY!” Twilight Velvet hissed. “Don’t say stuff like that out loud! We TALKED about this!”

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Caught a comment from Nova which was inspired by a suggestion from Steel Resolve AFTER I published. I had to go back and expand on a scene. For all those who got on that Mother of Midnight train super early, here's the addition:

“Please-have-dinner-with-us-tonight!” Twilight Velvet blurted out.

“Well, I mean, there’s still that hole—”

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